06. October 2007, 02:07:45

#5

sgt.jonas grantQuote

hey, please leave me a chance, i learned english mostly by playing video games and watching movies, but i perfectly understand it.
the translation of the first part should be ready soon

02. April 2008, 22:02:44

#6

GacoQuote

Link to original article: http://web.archive.org/web/20000816000301/desslock.gamespot.com/features/systemshock2/ss2fiction-1.html

Found it in the other thread about the timeline, I thought it should be here as well

14. November 2008, 14:03:18

#7

KolyaQuote

Very likely there is a line missing between these two sentences in Part 1:

"Oh, so you tracked me down through your elaborate UNN spy network. I don't know whether to be flattered or disturbed by that, Captain."

"I don't think that's a good idea. Why don't you contact one of TriOp's lawyers? If you throw a stick at New Atlanta, you're likely to hit one."

The context suggests that these are both uttered by Delacroix and that an answer by Diego was left out in between, like: "Can you just spare a minute and talk with me, Doctor?"
That line would be missing from the start, that is even in Ken Levine's original text.

Now I wanted to add that line for Diego Jr., to increase readability, but that got me into a massive fan debate with Vraptor7 about changing the original canonical text, about the sense of archiving and last but not least about the question who I think I am. All in good fun of course.
Anyway, I'll leave it as it is. Mainly because if no one noticed this for nine years, it might not be that important.

17. September 2011, 22:28:42

#8

unn_atroposQuote

ShephardReborn made a reading of this text:
http://www.youtube.com/user/ShephardReborn